Welcome to Triangle Shirwaist Factory Fire and More. Here you may find information about:
-Woman's Rights.
-Immigration.
-Italians in America.
-Worker's rights.
-Workplace saftey improvements after the Fire of 1911.
-& much more!
Hope you find what you are looking for.
Alonso,
ResponderEliminarHere is my feedback:
I see that you have your paragraphs of information, but the Worker's Rights/Organized Labor Movement paragraph should give some info about how workers attempted to improve their conditions. Explain what the working conditions were like and how they formed unions to make improvements.
-The Women's Rights paragraph does not appear to be in your own words. I looked at the link you provided and the wording seems identical. You need to change this or it is plagiarism.
-You should have 5-6 primary sources on the actual web page. It seems you have 2 sources, and then provided links to the others. Is it possible to put them all on the web page?
Your project is looking good, but I think you should make a few of these fixes if possible to get a higher score.